All Comments on 'Valerie'

Nicely done story of lonely people caring for each other.

Romantic story , nicely done , warmly arousing

Nice! They may be on their way to finding each other for real! Maybe his swimmers will find an egg...

Good story!

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I loved it ,my kind of story you did a wonderful job on the story and on yourself and also Franklyn . sounded pretty natural.

As a widower, I can identify with Franklyn's grief over his losses of love and intimacy. Even something as simple as a smile can brighten a dreary day. You captured his and Valerie's feelings very well.

For sure this story demands further chapters! 5 stars!