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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
It is nice to see a female protagonist

Great start. I will be looking for more of this story. Keep it up. The USAF Brat is a great addition.

EclecticReaderEclecticReaderover 6 years ago
Welcome back!

I totally enjoy your work. It is detailed and realistic. The references to current day culture are perfection

Thanks for sharing your imagination and story telling skill.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Show dont tell

The fight scene was nice but too detailed

The rest was just a lot of inderect exposition that doesnt innvolve me as a reader

kitty_siamkitty_siamover 6 years agoAuthor
Show don't tell

Dear Anonymous,

This is the way I write, if you do not like it... stop reading my stories. Perhaps you would enjoy something else... like a comic book with lots of pictures?

Anonymous complaints suck,

~ Kitty ~

GrantLeeStoneGrantLeeStoneover 6 years ago
Great Action

I enjoyed the detail in the fight.

Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

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