All Comments on 'Valley College Dream Ch. 02'

It's remarkable, the details that'll break suspension of disbelief.

> The first thing he saw was a huge poster on the opposite wall, featuring a cartoon sperm with a speech bubble that just said: DON'T. It extolled the issues that semen would cause to the building's pipes

Plumbing that can handle shit can certainly handle cum. And even if plumbing had to be specially designed to deal with cum, it's a *university dorm*. Not designing the plumbing to deal with cum would be professional malpractice.

The invisible intangible telepathic sex demon, I have no problems with.