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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What a downer ending. If you're going to use innocent characters, at least give them a happy ending. Otherwise use jerks who deserve what's coming to them. Not a fan of this level of sadism and wish there was no scat either.

halleonardhalleonardover 2 years ago

Don't listen to the other guy, not sure why he's even here if he dislikes so much about your writing. Love your stuff, just keep doing you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

For me, there's still something missing from this story, I'd like to see how Nate would react if Mary did her bathroom stuff on him.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

For me, there's still something missing from this story, I'd like to see how Nate would react if Mary did her bathroom stuff on him.

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