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All Comments on 'Vampire Civilization Ch. 06'

by Samuelx

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

STOP!!!!! Understand, no one reads this shit. We just skip and comment trying to convince you, find mental help, you really need it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Holy crap, this is terrible. What kind of diseased mind writes this?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Put some time into these 'stories' - develop an actual plot

Again, this felt like it could have been an entire book. Put some time and love into these 'posts' (can't even truly call it a story), instead of just posting summaries of ideas.

Like, rather than a six part series, these are short summaries of six book ideas that are only loosely related. I get that you are 'living by your own rules' but it feels like you're not even trying to improve as a writer. You're just nonstop cranking out ideas you have, and it seems as if you're not putting any effort into any of your ideas.

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I am Samuelx. I am Black. I am Male. I was born in Cap-Haitien, Northern Haiti, and raised in Brockton, Massachusetts. I now live in Canada. I am the one and only Haitian Trickster, and quite simply live only by my own rules. I...