All Comments on 'Vampire Dreams'

good beginning....keep writing

I hope the next chapter is coming soon. This was really enjoyable and I'm wondering who kept Zin away from him???

Like the previous comments I wonder if this is just the beginning? It is a good stand alone story but also offers the possibility of more. Should I keep my eye open for more?

It is a very good stand alone story but also offers the possibility of more. Should I keep my eye open for more? Hopefully.

You could and should turn this into a serious story. Think about doing it please. Luc her name by the way!!!

im currently working on #2, be on the lookout!

i don't know if this really qualifies as erotic but I do think you could write a real story around this its not bad at all