All Comments on 'Vampire/Human Liason'

Hot Start!! Hope this storyline continues! Left me wanting to satisfy the ache in my loins; love bare pussy.

Don't stop there! I want more!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next.

although I was a tiny turned off by the vulgar word dick and pussy I was turned on nonetheless I would love to see what happens and if she dumps her loser boyfriend for hot sexy and undead laughs

Thank You All For Your Lovely Comments!

I really wasn't expecting anyone to even read it so to have people write nice things about my writing is fab!

I wasn't originally going to make this into more than a oneshot but seeing as people actually like it, I may add more.

Don't expect anything soon though, because i really haven't got anymore ideas for this one like I said, I wasn't going to make this more than a oneshot so I didn't bother thinking up a proper plotline, and any suggestions for how I could continue it would be greatly appreciated.

One person was offended by some of the words I used, I'm sorry and will TRY not to use them in possible future chapters.

Thank You Again From the Writer,

Bella_Barbaric.

This started out SO GOOD, and then just ended.

Good story but that's it ?