All Comments on 'Vegas Baby!'

by Mcreads

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lc69hunterlc69hunteralmost 2 years ago

Not a bad story, but you need to flesh out the characters better

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Great story.

eminds me of a trip toAruba with great casinos amd bars bars (ascwell as topless snotrkeeling) .

But nothing quite as hot as this trip to Vegas!

Thank you.

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