All Comments on 'Vessel'

Could have done without the 'anal' but this was a hot little story and you can never have enough slime girls :)

Thank you.

May I ask why you use kitten instead of pussy? Makes it sound like you have a furry fetish. Of course anal is tighter and its Apron not asprin or aprin. Ohh and yes Kittens don't go into heat cats do..I take it she became see through when he came ? Nice sex story for the most part though needs more?

Story idea was good but there is so much that can be improved. Above all there's the grammar. You really need an editor. Also for a googirl fetish story it wasn't very "googirly" - the whole appeal of that fetish is the idea of a creature made of liquid or capable of changing her body like liquid, and all the possibilities that gives but Kenzie is fairly solid through it all.

I wouldn't worry too much about the minor errors, a read through before posting (and spell checker ) will help. More importantly this is a good, and hot, story. Keep writing.