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What the hell? You had a really great start to the story. However you tell us about all the "fun" toys on the counter and the "not so plesant looking toys" on the other side and all we get is a little oral and foot manipulation? What a let down. Lesbian non conscent is not so readily found. Why not rewrite and bring all those fun toys into play? Just one girls opinion.

I wrote this piece for a particular person, intending to keep it entirely gender neutral as they were somewhat confused when I wrote it and I was pandering to their preferences. The not so pleasant toys were there as a mind fuck to shock them more than anything else because the main thing here was meant to be kidnapped and helpless.

Ohhhh to be taken in this manner and used for Mistress’ pleasure.