All Comments on 'Victoria Victorious Ch. 02'

looking forward to more.

Still too short. Too quick to involve that cock, and nothing to his real, live cock. She could/should have teased it herself for a while before starting with the fake cock.

I appreciate the comments!

You are probably right, I should have had more foreplay. When I right stories I tend to try to jump write to the scene or fetish that gets me off.

Victoria and Amanda are going to have a lot of fun with their bitch boy. His sister probably will get in on the action too. The story started well in chapter 01 but this chapter kind of jumped right into the sex without much reasoning. I mean, he was going to sleep then bam Victoria had basically blackmailed him (evidence? hardly) and then from somewhere she had a strap-on (probably from Amanda?). I hope to see this guy get dressed up and "outed" at a gay bar, or maybe at a gloryhole setup at a sex shop? So many scenarios it boggles the creative mind. I really liked the start and hope there are many more adventures ahead.

You have got to keep this going

Like I stated in my chapter 1 comments… this story has been abandoned and left to die. The writer doesn’t appear to be posting here anymore so I’m sure this is the end…and that’s ok. We get a high school girl who goes to a friends parents house to hang out in the basement…and she brings her strap on dildo. Lol

Could have been fun if time was taken to set up better and actually finish the story.