by Drmaxc
Been there done that. If you have never experienced what you just wrote about, let me assure you, you got it just right. And for that I gave it and your excellent writing a 5, something I'm very stingy with.
Disregard what I said at chapter 4 as I now understand having read chapter 4 before chapter 3. Silly of me, but having highlighted the wrong chapter and my machine serving it upto me I couldn't be bothered to correct it or myself, hence jumping to conclusions, I'm glad one of us is putting the cart behind the horse Max i should have known, but Jill so generous to her friend Mandy donating her husband and the use of his equipment to her enjoyment . What a sainted lady. I take my hat off to both her and you. Five stars as always.