All Comments on 'Violet Lovedoll Pt. 01'

Can barely read this this without revolting. Yes some people may have fantasies about sex slavery and all that, but this... this takes it to a whole other level. I can appreciate the effort spent writing this, my mind just can’t get aroused from this. It just feels so... wrong.

Sorry if I seem to be ranting, but when I read books I tend to place myself in the position of the Main character. As in, I mentally become the character.

This novel is... great. Amd well written. Sadly, it just doesn’t sit well with me.

C’est une bonne histoire.

J’aime le mélange entre amour et esclavage.

Curieux pour la suite

This is so gorgeous and detailed. I adore it. Thank you, thank you.

I have been following your story on your own personal blog. I see this is the first 7 chapters. Personally, I prefer the shorter, more easily digestible chapters on your blog. Seems the other readers are not a fan, but I like it. Nevertheless, no harm cross-posting here since they have already been written. Keep writing!

Absolutely disgusting. You disrespect and care so little for human women. It's time you quit this; the world has enough without you adding to its misery.

I love science fiction, specially when the action is set in a dystopian future! Combine it with porn? I look forward to reading the rest! 5⭐

Boring ... so 2* only

The story definitely deserves 5 stars that I gave it. Please publish some more soon.

I really enjoyed your new story and had to give it 5 stars.

Just my wheelhouse! Can't wait to see where you take it

I enjoyed this a lot and hope you will write more!

You write well. Please continue this story, and thank you for sharing it.

Well done! I love stories that show the personal growth and transformation of the characters. This was an excellent story of bondage and transformation, and Violet was the perfect character to tell the story.

I had to withhold 5* only for the number of errors in grammar and spelling (and some incomplete sentences) that distracted from what otherwise was a perfect story. A good scrub of the story would only make the story better.

Thank you for sharing this. It was great.

Good writing. Good science fiction.

Gandalf, "He that breaks a thing to find out what it is has left the path of wisdom.” Such soulless actions as described here can only destroy, not improve.

Your writing is as choppy as it is nonsensical.

Excellent.Well written with me r two minor inaccuracies, but a compelling read nonetheless. Well worth all of five stars, more if they were available.

i would love to see this as a video/movie

When you are owned by a true Master it is a pleasurable life you lead, you will experience pain then pleasure and I have mini orgasms when my Master uses me and cums! It’s what I live for❤️❤️

I try to jack off to this but EVERY DAMN TIME I imagine a choo-choo Mp3 and I just burst out laughing.

Violet is chained to a train set. That is my story rating.

I- I am speechless? There is always a risk when you look for erotic content that aligns with darker kinks and this is a perfect example. Carefully written, with a nice sense of realism regardinγ the feelings and thoughts of the main character and a detailed description of the whole science fiction proceedure, features that emphasized the disturbing nature of the story itself... There is always a fine line between a creative and pleasurable smut and a horrific and inhuman creation like this. Honeslty I can see and appreciate the talent the writter has and I also respect the mixture of emotions that made me feel, but I literally had nightmares after reading this. I give 5* but as dark and degrading my kinks are, I hope I will never have a partner soulless enough to actually get aroused by this.