All Comments on 'Visitor'

Thank you. A very good first story.

But one question - when did a drawer become a draw?

Good storytelling, nice, intoxicating pace and the right length. At first I missed the usual, almost obligatory set up stuff but it really is often superfluous and sometime off-putting. As the story (quickly) unfolded we SAW the truth about their relationship and randy inclinations without tedious explication. Bravo. And thanks, too. (The "tags" might be amended to add "interracial," don't you think?) Keep up the good work.

Doug

Great story but a bit risky with kids in the house ?

Very unbelievable! as a married couple with young children for them both to be so obviously getting down and dirty with the sole attention to this young black man being about sex. So I found it an unwanted story and not very readable.