All Comments on 'Volley For Serve Ch. 03'

Sounds like you have finished with this, I hope not. It is a good story and there is plenty of scope to use yet. Please carry on.

Dad returns in a grand finale!

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Honestly it started good then the ending seemed like it was quickly written due to lack to imagination and inspiration.

Follow through with your story, if you decides to add a twist to it, such as the husband finding out and coming in the middle of it, make a twist out of it. Don't just kill it and be like well that was the end of it. We want to know about the character, just because she got pregnant doesn't mean that her urges are satisfied. The husband must obviously have some questions as well. Very underdeveloped. And yeah even though you have another chapter written out, this ending was just a buzz kill

AAAHHH! A father knocking up his horny daughter! I love it! Even better if she continues her black cock lust and has a black baby.

Brian