All Comments on 'Voyeur Show on the Lake'

A truly awesome day on the boat. Nothing beats these days.

Wow a wonderful and believable story, paced right to keep me horny throughout. Please continue with more adventures

Great story and glad you kept the couples as couples apart from the semi-bukkakae ending, but that worked well.

Two errors I spotted and I'm loath to point them out as the story is so well crafted but then again that's whats makes them stand out.

Throughout Dammon is described as a finance, but on page 2 he's called her husband, and two as she comes out of the water and everyone can see through the bikini she takes it off, but later she is turned on by stripping it off. You needed to say that earlier it was only the top that came off.

Great story

Very nice

Loved it! I can personally attest to the magic of being out on a boat with friends. Somehow, the water washes away inhibitions. :-)

I like the way you slowly built up the tension and kept us inside the head of the main character. I also like that you kept things realistic and that it didn't turn into a crazy fuck-fest gangbang where every character had to sample every orifice of everyone else on board. This is a believable story - the kind I like best :-)

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