All Comments on 'VR Sex World Pt. 01'

Great start, really wanna know what happens next

Thank you for checking out my story and getting into it. I have a few things plan, but I hope I can really keep building on it. I've already uploaded part 2 and awaiting for approval. It's much shorter than the first, but it's meant to keep things rolling forward, because the first one has a lot more setup. I'm also done writing part 3, so watch out for updates.

Fun read. It is of course slightly confusing but I am sure it will clear up as the story builds.

Thank you for reading and glad to hear you had fun. If possible, please let me know what is confusing. Is it how the virtual world works? The actions are not clear? Who is actually talking? I'll try to improve on the other parts if I can. Cheers.

To start with, you could learn how to write, and then how to not be such a shitty human bring.