All Comments on 'Waiting for Nicholas'

Very well written. I love your writing style and think it is some of the best I have seen here on literotica.

I have just written my first ever story and would love for you to read it and let me know your thoughts and critique.

(A Tale of Two Wives 001)

granoldad

I just guess I am a incurable romantic.

If only a love like this really existed.

All of us are liking for second best, it seems.

Never finding the one.

I don't mind the story but not what I expected.

I agree it would be better in Erotic Horror.

I don't mind the story but not what I expected.

I agree it would be better in Erotic Horror.

This should have been under Erotic Horror.