by PreacherPorn
This is a fantastic story. It has so much more depth to it than just the typical MC story. Hopefully there are many more installments to follow. THank you.
It nice to read a story that keeps growing! Please keep up the great work! Thank you!
You never cease to amaze me with your imagination. I just hope this series doesn't end here.
You have quite the imagination there preacher. I wonder where you thought this up?
Glad you all are enjoying the story. I just submitted part 10 figure it will get published sometime after the first of the week.
This is just wickedly fun! I can't wait to see where you're going to take it from here...
Well this story spun out of control and off the rails. I'd give the first 2/3rds a 5, and the last 3rd a 1. Too bad, the story was going well.
We are NOT all enjoying this story. You've turned him into something worse than his father was.
Really jumped the shark, haven't you?
The beginning was soooo promising, but you just threw it away
"You are going to call up your Cayman bank and have four hundred, nine hundred and ninety-nine thousand nine hundred and ninety-nine million dollars transferred to this account"
Somebody help me. I can't figure this amount out.
It's kind of exploded into something super wierd with the MC turning into some kind of power crazed lunatic. Dominance is not about taking without permission. It's about accepting the gift of submission and understanding that with that power comes huge responsibility.
This story reads like another of this authors creations, titled "Geek's Big Break " and the mc of that story is far and away a better MAN than than douchebag AKA Greg Masters.
I sure hope he redeems himself before she is done with him
This was not as strong as the other chapters, but I'm still on board to see how this ends.
This Megalomaniac just keeps getting worse and worse... As does this story. Please do all of us a favor and remove his power and grant it to someone more humble and deserving. Thanks, 2 stars.
Now he can control the goddesses of fate? Oh for fuck sake this is getting ridiculous. At least there was some vengeance in this chapter. I think the author smoked either some really bad shit, or some REALLY good shit, because at this point, this story is far out there. I can't imagine how crazy it's going to get now. We've lost the plot and Greg along with it.
Слишком... Автор это уже слишком! Зачем? Ещё столько дел в городе, столько вариантов. Зачем забираться в такие темы? Тем более поддерживать баланс более чем хорошее занятие