by MAGG5
The descriptions in here are great--not just the sex either. This might have been the best written piece I've ever read here. The only suggestion I have is with your apostrophes.
Wow
What a brilliant erotic story.
Fabulous fantasy and wonderfully descriptive writing.
One of the best stories I have read.
Absolutely loved it!
Thank you MAGG5
XXX
Excellent erotic description. I’m just starting to write myself and admire your style.
A wonderful fantasy well executed and it got me feeling horny - which is the whole point of course. Thanks for sharing, I’m looking forward to more