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Click hereWanda's other cousin was now onstage to confront the reggae singers who had Wanda at their mercy. Tanya tried to use her pepper spray key chain only to find it was not functional after she had used it the day before. The reggae singers lowered moved the limbo bar from behind Wanda's neck to the front of her body. They then lowered the bar to the floor so that Wanda was trapped in the doggie position before they stood on the bar waiting to engage with Tanya.
"If ya mess wid me girl, I'll steal dem panty and spank dat ass good." the lead singer said as Tanya squared up.
The two frat boys angrily recovered from having their heads slammed together. While the two reggae singers had to keep one foot on the limbo bar limiting the amount they could go on offense against both were fairly tough Yardies from the streets of Kingston. It wasn't going to be easy for Tanya to move either of the musicians. Diana had a different problem, the two frat boys were kind of suburban candy asses but there were two of them. Neither of Wanda's cousins really wanted to fight in the breezy short sundresses they were wearing. The threat of an embarrassing wardrobe malfunction was amplified by the presence of the camera crew still documenting the party events.
"I have you just how I want you, on your hands and knees." Wanda heard from her rear as the DJ crouched behind her and ran his hand up her thigh.
"I promise you, for every drop of sperm you spill my husband is gonna take a gallon of blood." Wanda told him.
"You can tell I'm real worried about it." the DJ said rubbing Wanda's clit with two fingers through the cloth of her bikini bottoms.
Wanda was unable to control her body from shuddering from the sensation of a strange man touching her sex. She heard the sound of zipper.
"Don't you dare." Wanda said as she felt her bikini pulled to the side.
"We see how wet you are? Don't pretend you don't want it." The DJ said sticking his fingers dripping with Wanda's juices in her face.
Wanda's vision clicked past the DJ's slick fingers to the hulking form yanking the limbo bar up from the floor of the stage. Wanda couldn't see the looks on the DJ and reggae singers faces but he imagined pure terror as her husband twisted the thick wood bar in his grip until a loud crack of the pole splintering in two rang out. It felt like the temperature dropped fifteen degrees as not only the DJ and singers put together who Julie was but the two frat guys who had been relishing the prospect of wrestling Diana in her sundress.
Wanda stood up freed from her bondage. Her tormentors exchanged glances with each other. They were silently debating whether to flee and hope Julie pursued the other four perpetrators or to try and gang up and try him five against one. Julie didn't make it any easier to decide as instead of sizing up his targets he was clearly enjoying the site of his wife adjusting her bikini top and still stripped of her wrap-around skirt. It wasn't until they looked to the right and saw the bloody Mouseketeer Hat and an unmoving heap of a man in a green and yellow tropical shirt curled into a fetal ball.
The five sexual predators made an instant decision to scatter to the four winds as fast s possible. Wanda and her husband exchanged an almost amused look at her tormentors' bad luck of trying to run from a man who hunts people for a living.
- COMMENTS
Pugzillaover 1 year agoAuthorI understand the action scene critique. In other entries I might try to argue with you but it was a touch under written here. When you have a following even one as small as my Literotica audience you have to keep your production up to keep it. I like to think when I want to my action scene writing is my best stuff. This is an erotic fiction site though. My target audience is here to read about big breasts exposed in a public setting and how the owner of those breasts reacts to being on display for the delight of those lucky enough to witness the event. The site can sometimes be touchy about violence so I try not to get too caught up in writing vivid details of violent retribution. Its easier to skirt the moderators' standards on a topic if I'm not doing it every week. At the moment I am putting extra effort into playing it safe because I have found myself writing in the high school setting again in two separate threads making it very easy to accidentally write something that sets off pedo alarms. All my characters are 18 but if I reference something from a previous year I'm in violation or at risk of a violation if I don't add the detail of the reference being after 18 birthday. I might be more inclined to push the moderator more on violence once I age all my characters out of high school again but for now I am not pushing the issue.
Pugzillaalmost 2 years agoAuthorThe story that's slowing me up is a new character in the Jerry/Jeremiah school setting that hopefully is going to open up opportunities to write about some new themes. My intro to the character is solid and it's a good jumping off point for future stories with characters I'm not only less attached to but are almost written for other would be authors to take for test drive in their own WandaVerse tale. I highly recommend anyone thinking of dipping their tow in the erotic fiction pool to give it a try. It'd been so much fun. This is a wonderful platform that doesn't require flawless writing technique to participate. Your story not only doesn't have to be perfect but your next story can always improve on the one before it. I welcome all my readers to write a Wanda story of their own as long as you credit the source. It's not necessary that I consider the story part of my canon. You have enough for a story with the tight button-up shirt thing. You have a solid set of established characters to plug into the situation. So with minimal set up you could get right into the good part of the story. I'm not going to be upset if you do something I wouldn't do in my stories. In all honesty the Wandaverse is filled with unreliable narrator type characters who would lie or embellish about an encounter I have even had Wanda herself embellish an incident because it turns her husband on.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoHow about wanda wearing a top with buttons that is a bit too tight, and it shrinks after getting wet? Someone could have given her the shirt to wear and have known its weakness, allowing them to wet it and sit back as the inevitable exposure happens as her shirt shrinks and pops open? Just an idea
Pugzillaalmost 2 years agoAuthorI'm feeling a lot better. I'm fully vaccinated and I got the booster so it wasn't as bad as it could have been. It lingered this time. I'm having a hard time just with the entry I'm working on. It's a good intro but I don't have a solid idea for an incident. I don't love the idea I was working off of.
