by TheDarkCloud
to death as all rapists should be along with those who think who somehow confuse rapists with real men.
Thoroughly enjoyable story, just a pity you didn't tell what the two of them did to Lucy, but I can imagine.
Shame that the story fast forwards to 9 months since (or that years passed by in the island)so much more could have been told about how things progressed for all characters.
Also would have preferred a bad ending for the "English Rose" though Lucy's end was ok too.
Still, this was a very good way to end the story and is one of my favorites among the stories you have.
I've read this story several times, it is one of my all time favourites. Like the other comment, I'd like to know what they did to the bitch !
This really needs a chapter four! Nice touch having Victoria & David together in the end, even if it might have been just for a common goal (vengeance)!
It could have so much more, not enough description on the sex, and there should have been a page to what they did to lucy.
One of my all time favourite stories. I'd love to know what punishment was handed out !