by 8itgood
Its your story but if this was my story i would write about how the Ray left this psycho woman alone and lived a stress free life.
Female victim mentality. Do. Not understand it…it seems it is his fault for the divorce. Share wants to make him pay for her suffering. I couldn’t handle much of this attitude. Hell if she wanted to stay at the club let her, it would have saved a lot of DRAMA!
I,m still in two minds about this, you can really write some good things, really good descriptions but the plot/ story line just has this dark dark side to it, maybe that’s why I can’t make my mind up about it