All Comments on 'Wasted by Love'

by Verhaalen

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 1 month ago
Alcohol so common in overcoming taboo

Beautifully told with perfect history and pace making the reader voyeuristic. For those who've experienced taboo alcohol helps erase archaic societal mores.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Let the story continue. Till death do us part! 5/5

muskyboymuskyboyabout 1 month ago

What? One last trick? What is wrong with her. Without any context this story makes zero sense.

Klubot99Klubot99about 1 month ago

Love it. Love your writing. Please more mom/son. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Hopefully. she wasn't on birth control.. Fertile for his hot cum. A baby bump in a few months. So wrong, but so good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I gave it a 3.

He found her drunk and takes her upstairs and then fucks her. Really?

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