All Comments on 'Watch Me!'

I have a word for stories like this, I call them "Two Minute Drills." My ex wife and I reveled in making them up and living them.

Thanks for your comment. I love the "two minute drill", as you call it. I suppose that's why I like to write them. I admire those who can produce page after page of engaging story, but at this early point in my writing, I work at it pretty hard just to produce short ones. Thanks, again!

After years of reading this story was the one to get me to make an account. WEllis done and keep them coming!

Thanks very much! I'll do my best to please.

Loved this one! MORE, please.....

I do enjoy stories to which I can relate - stories that feel so real - hold my attention with the plausibility as well as mimic my own experiences in some manner. This was one of those stories.

I enjoyed the closeness, affection, tension I felt between the characters. And def enjoyed the erotic nature of their bond and eventual interaction. Well done. Had me longing for more!

Can we have more of these two I loved it