All Comments on 'Watched at the Beach'

This is an excellent tale. Happy to give it five stars!

Okay story, though nothing really new. I was amused by the, 'The beach would be closing soon ....' Down here in Australia all beaches are open 24 hours. There would be riots if they tried to close them at night!

Short, sweet, sexy, and to the point. Great imagery, well written. A snapshot of a sexy moment in their lives; not pretending to be more, just enjoying what it is. Good job, and keep writing.

Short and to the point, 👍 awesome