by Shadowcatcher
I always enjoyed your stories, and wondered if you were ever going to write again.
Your work is great, and I've always thought it was a tragedy that you stopped writing. You have a nice touch for writing the interior of the characters. Great to see that you are back. I'd love for sequels to some of your other one-shots, another for this story, or brand new ones.
Let's hope there isn't a 15 year wait for Chapter 3 as this is brill.
liked your story - the tension is pretty good. Nevertheless,some twists in the story are a little aprupt for my taste - just in case you might be interested, I did edit and stored an extended version of it...