All Comments on 'Watching the Watcher'

Tremendously erotic twists and turns. Your so gifted, how you write is so descriptive, clear, and wonderfully dirty.

You can go so many ways if you decide to add more chapters to this scenario. Please take me on that journey!

I can't give you a 10 (on many of your works also) but you have it anyway. Please write more?

Gifted for sure..

Great concepts but long enough. Needs more development. Still. 5 stars.

An interesting premise of a story, liked the twist with the mother. I did think you could be slightly more descriptive about the guests to enable us to imagine them more easily. Authors point....there was one major typo. A.

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