All Comments on 'Water Park Fun Ch. 10 - Pool Party'

1 complaint… sort of. The last 3 stories were so much shorter than the others. They’re well written, but they’ve like a tease compared to the earlier chapters. Keep them coming either way though. This is my new favorite series! 5 for every chapter.

Really had to follow. Too man quotes and too many different characters to keep track of with all the talking and quotes. I didn’t get past the first few paragraphs.

I am LOVING this series! Keep it up, I can't wait to find out what happens next

Well written and the characters are very likeable

MORE MORE I WANT MORE!