All Comments on 'Wavering Attention'

Your writing is so wonderfully vivid.

A short story between two lovers that really has more to it than the captivating graphically erotic sex: Relaxed almost mundane real life (doing dishes), day dreaming arousal (perfect title), two lovers whose attraction to one another is palpable (could easily develop the two like you did with Suzi and Moriah — not suggesting doing so, just an observation; like as a one off dalliance), expressive vivid sex. And the dishes got done. The latter is funny and revealing of their love. OK — I rambled a bit much over a very short story, but … .

Very cute snapshot of a hot couple. I love the POV 💕

Wonderful story! Thank you for sharing.