All Comments on 'Waves and Dreams Ch. 03'

You need to cut those huge paragraphs up into readable portions. Change of thought- different paragraph. It sure makes the reading easier.

please don't lose interest yet in this story. you can take it to so many places

Please write on. I like the story and want to hear her story. I like the cat and dog too,

You're doing great, so far. Take a deep breath, take your time, and continue on with this great story. You're very good.

where is the next part???? i want to know what happen next??? hmmm

please keep writing it is great!!!!

This is a great story, and I really hope that you will continue it in the future. Keep up the great work.

~Nightime