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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

He shouldn't need stretchy string for real bows. The power behind the arrow comes from the tension in the bow itself, not from the elasticity of the string. For any bow, but especially for ones with a heavier draw weight, you bend the bow as opposed to drawing the string.

SniperkingSniperking7 months ago

in chp 5

"When asked about a king or emperor, the two wives simply cocked their heads at him blankly."

but in this chapter

"I enjoy many stories master, particularly romance. My favorite being Sebastian Cole's Sunderland, where the Hero falls in love with king's service mate and must find a way to escape with her." She blushed, looking shyly at her hands, "It's just a wonderfully written story.

so is there a king or not?

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