All Comments on 'We Give Up Control Pt. 03'

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GcoachG over 3 years ago

Please more!!! More than 4 too please

Anonymousover 3 years ago

the realization

I do like the mental aspects of our story and the suspense of having your step mother to dinner with a meal she hates a set up for some punishment will the stepmom be an observer or take part in the domination? Hope we dont have to wait too long

TwistedDaveAuthor over 3 years agoAuthor

mattenw: but you are still reading... something here must strike a guilty pleasure in you... I wonder just how long you will be on this ride.

Anonymous: I hope you enjoyed part 4, part 5 is around the corner.

GcoachG: your wish... granted, part 5 is in the works.

oh and Mattenw, just wait for my Erotic Horror story, I can not wait to hear what you have to say about my psyche then...

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Former military, semi-serious writer. Published a few stories on Amazon as Twisted Dave. I tend to write non-consent/reluctance, took a trip into a romance story, dabble in incest stories and willing to try other genres. I use my writing as a way to cope with everyday stress. ...

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