by amorone
It reads as if there will be more with Andrew's friend looking to visit.
Very nicely done. Perhaps Andrew should invite a number of his friends to visit, and they can all enjoy gang banging Margaret.
It really is delectable. The older lady telling her husband about their young lodger. The best parts were the husbands thoughts and desires.
Mary
The subject matter is very similar to my own stories so perhaps that's why I enjoyed both chapters so much. Looking forward to the third installment.
The action is great, but the husband's enjoyment is palpable, at least as much as the wife's and her young lover's. So easy for me to relate to these events.
ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca
Wow, Margaret was getting well serviced by two men. I hope the author revisits these characters and gives us some more stories. The friend joining in on the fun and Andrew finding out that John is loving his wife's shenanigans are two chapters.
If, when I read an erotic story, I find my hand between my legs, as I picture the scene, unzipping my pants and more if I have the privacy, then I know the story has done what the author hoped it would. A lot of this story was read with cock in hand - which speaks volumes.
As a fellow story writer I might have had partially undressed Margaret follow the boy upstairs while John was left watching TV but fully aware of what might be going on. But this ain't my story. I would suggest that even though this story is old, it's nevertheless not to late to write further chapters with maybe a new student lodger.