by Slowandeasy47
I always love to read a woman's perspective on a sexual encounter. They are a much better barometer of the completeness of the, unfettered and unladen with burden of ego as to penis size and the vigor the act represented. But rather the release and relaxation and comfort it represents.
This was a little faster with less suspense than chapter 1. It was still lovely and well written. I love your ability to portray suspense, build-up, reticence in the the face of lust, and honesty of feeling.
*****That was Hot good Sex. I guess pop's will get in on it soon? Looking forward to future chapters. Thanks for sharing.
Love this! I don't know if it is intentional but I loved the contrast from chapter 1:
> but not one of those, 'As I stuck my dick in she came' sort of authors
to now:
> He sank slowly into my soul! As he did so I came!
Excellent writing, very well paced and beautifully erotic.
Deserved and was given a 5 ....... Thank you for sharing your gift ...... T