All Comments on 'We Shouldn't'

Did you forget to add the rest of the story. Anticipation can be a good thing, but damn , a couple of hundred words and you are done. Probably one of the worst stories I have read on here. Better luck next time.

Good job fellow Canadian. Keep it going but please do it all at once.

More!

Needs lots more dialogue and the other 1/2 of the story.

I thought all good until the abrupt ending... The build up was great, until it led to nothing...

A wonderful episode of truly deep love taking control of an incestuous couple. Nicely told, with a sensuality often omitted in this Literotica.com category.

The timing is right on!

Your words ebb and flow, fully immersing we readers with the moments.

About the 'rest of the story.' This chapter is complete within itself. Further episodes will undoubtedly become more intense and unbelievably sensual.

Did not like it you got us on the edge then stopped!!!!!!! Where's the incest??????????????????

Nice scene to an incomplete story.

Did not care for this no incest and too damn short just a 2

We shouldn't and you didn't BLAW

I've been reading since 1974 and this is one of the best. Masterfully crafted in content and mechanics.

Please continue.

why stop there? who so short?

needs another chapter

Don’t stop there lol !

AS Alex's mom started stroking his cock from the base to his head and Alex groaned, "Oh Mom." He was so hard that he rolled over on top of his mom. With the head of his cock against his mom's wet opening, Alex pushed into his mom's pussy. "Oh Alex, you're so big, fuck me honey, I want your cock inside of me.

What the hell was this ???????????????????????

Hated it