- Group Sex
- Wedding Vows
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Click hereChris said to him, You may now kiss the bride.
So he did.
- COMMENTS
SteveWallace5 months agoWow, longest paragraphs on record. They make it hard to read, btw. Otherwise, wow.
Anonymous5 months agoLoved it. Touched on almost every one of my kinks. I’ll definitely be rereading this one.
Anonymous5 months agoI thought, from the standard of this attempt at writing, that it must be your first.
Imagine my surprise when I looked at your list of stories!
Has NO-ONE every told you how to show what is INTENDED to be "speech"??
It got so confusing that I gave up when I had to read passages through three times to work out what you were intending to say!
I didn't even finish the FIRST page!
I've been generous with 2*!
ukrainian5 months agoSo very very HOT. Do not listen to the grammar Nazi who read and then pick your story to pieces. Far too often they post nothing but hate and no stories of their own. You have talent. This story needs a part two. Maybe an anniversary party for parents or other family. Very much looking forward too many more chapters. Thank you for writing.
Anonymous5 months agoQuotation marks are NOT optional.
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Learn how to write a paragraph. When I saw the one starting with "I staggered to my feet...." that went on and on, I stopped and gave this a 1.
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When Amy moved away was a good time to start a new one. When Amy returns is another, and so on.
Anonymous5 months agoWow. What a horrible way to start a marriage. Why get married if you're both going to fuck around?
