by Mad Lews
Nice story Mad--Had a real nice Build-- I kept waiting for the 'Grand Finale'-- Where was it?
A very good story even though I didn't like it. I enjoyed it. The build was very good. You're a skilled writer.
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I have to agree with Xelain_lover, it's an extremely good story, you simply cannot stop reading; however, it wasn't my cup of tea. I don't like when pain is more present than pleasure (I prefer when pain and humiliation is simply a secondary ingredient rather than the course meal). Great writing though and certainly full of emotion!!
This story is amazing. It shifts tense seamlessly. I admit a part of the reason I like it so much is that I am fascinated by the theme.