by stripgnd
Fun little tale. As it’s his fantasy, why not a few involving him? Lap dance, he to remove their clothing items etc. Incidentally, it’s a Lovense. There’s no extra ‘s’.
Fun, but all the card playing got boring after awhile. If it was a video, i would have enjoyed this story.
I love the story! I hope you are still working on the rewrite! I would love to read an alternative version of this!
It was very good, but it was a bit short. I would definitely have included Sophie's father a little more. I would have put more decisions in his hands. For example, a bet that the losers masturbate in front of Sophie's father for 15 minutes or something like that. I really hope that you continue to deal with this story and that there will be a sequel. The maximum number of stars is available.