by milalex
Sorry but I couldn't get past about the first half of the first page with all the spelling mistakes, typos and bad continuity. Firstly they had been married for the 3 years, then 2.
Don't let the haters bother you, most people who complain couldn't even write out a grocery list. I gave you 5 stars to make up for all the low ratings. I enjoyed the poker story the best, but this wasn't terrible. keep writing. Peace..