All Comments on 'Weekend Plans'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

A good start but lacks a middle or end

LadyElisaLadyElisaabout 9 years ago

I loved the scene with Katie, naked on the bed looking back over her shoulder and sucking on her finger. It was very enticing. I also love how she manipulated the entire situation. Great story, Ninth.

LustKnightLustKnightabout 9 years ago
Lacks an ending...

...or a middle. Very abrupt.

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