All Comments on 'Weekend Trip Home'

by TruthwithaTwist

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Very good

I really enjoyed this. I hope you continue.

G5902G5902about 3 years ago
A really fun story!

Thank You for sharing this great story and I expect that it will do well in the competition!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Nice little story.

But it is spelled mastUrbate, not mastErbate.

LookOldButFeelYoungLookOldButFeelYoungabout 3 years ago

He really want to fuck the sister too. Maybe a FMF is in their future???

Ravey19Ravey19about 3 years ago
Nice Sexy Story

Just the right amount of teasing to keep the guessing going; will she, won't she; will he, won't he. Worked very well especially the last tease.

Great read.

yarnspinnerryarnspinnerrover 2 years ago

Yet another great read, Good job buddy.

I am wondering if you're going to tell the story about the wager on the football game, and what happened during the Bears game? ;->

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good premise.

But sorely lacking in details. Each sex scene starts too abruptly. Continues at breakneck speed. And ends too soon.

Most of it is 'story' and not sex at all.

Three stars.

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March 2024 Update: Just submitted my 25th story here on lit, "Festival of Fools" for the 2024 April Fools Contest. I'm incredibly thrilled with the reception all of my stories have gotten over the past few years. What started as a "let me try this once" has turned into a bit ...