All Comments on 'Weekend Tryst'

This is a lovely romance story, and it certainly needs a sequel. Indeed, the ending is very abrupt- much too abrupt. This particular chapter, in what it is hopefully a much longer story, needs a better build up, and more character development. Perhaps a prologue could be written, to give the reader a better understanding of the background involving the characters. The plot is excellent all the way through. While this reviewer is rather grumpy about the style, namely the use of the second person/present tense to narrate the story, the excellence of the story overall makes this a minor quibble.