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not romantic. Should have been in erotic couplings.

Should have been erotic couplings, be careful with punctuation and grammar and don't forget quotation marks when a character is talking.

I dont think I've ever read such a detailed or artful description of lovemaking.

However I agree with the other commenters on two points: 1) wrong category. Should have been in erotic couplings, and 2) could have used a proofread before posting.

However, I still gave you five stars because I liked the descriptiveness of this piece so much. Looking forward to reading more of your work.