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A real.loving wife that any husband would appreciate. Good story.

It is nice to read about a real married couple who are still hot for each other. The only thing I would have changed is maybe making it a little longer. Maybe what went through her mind to decide to do this maybe even how she picked out what little that she wore that night or how sexy she felt the day while getting ready. I gave it 4 stars good work!

If only in my dreams.

I know they weren't deaf mutes because she said a word or two, but honestly, there was just a lot of groping with this couple? Really?

Believe it or not, real people talk, before, during and after! Dialogue is sexy as hell. This is like the current film convention of not talking and fucking while standing up clothed and cunning as quickly as rabbits!

And this guy sums after a few strokes!

Slow down people and enjoy the ride!

Nicely done. Elegant women rock!

With no background it's an attempt at a flash story - maybe? But it's not well written and the sex was neither sexy or erotic. About as much emotion as watching paint dry. And here's a hint. Drop the "true story" baloney. You're on a porn site on the world wide web. No one believes a single word that spills out of your minds and onto the pages. Telling us that it's a "true" story just makes us laugh at you and does nothing for the story line.

1 star

Her behavior is definitely that of someone guilty. Time to call the divorce lawyer.

it's a faithful wife and faithful husband. it's very refreshing to see a normal story.

too many sad and lonely failures that write about 'how wonderful' it is....to have stupid affairs, break up families, line the pockets of corrupt courts, psychologically damage young children, and expose many unwitting spouses to STDs. yay....so...much...fun...

so continue to write and improve. you'll always be better at writing than 90% of the loving wives category even as a novice....because of all the sad propaganda trash a few lonely cucks try to echo chamber on.

"They crossed back across the concourse...."

This sentence is a piece of crap. Using cross and across together is just poor.

You're not getting paid by the word here.

The rest of the story? Meh, it doesn't score well. I'll give you a plus for not using to be continued as your conclusion!

No score, unless this turns out to be your MO. Then I'll come back and rate it accordingly.

oh and how have you been, TK U MLJ LV NV

Notice how all the anons are so supportive? I’m not sure where this is going, or if it is intended to, but it thought it was a good effort. It is nice to read that it is a couple’s effort. Who gets the sex scenes and who gets the ambience?

sorry but I disagree with the last anon.

you obviously didn't`read the story that I read.

(With one thrust of his hips he entered her. Sometimes when he first entered here there would be a light resistance, or friction, this time he practically fell into her hot pussy).

my heart says she has been cheating during her husbands week away.

so did she cheat that day with a bigger cock ?

sounds like it to me.