All Comments on 'Welcome Home Ch. 01'

Did I miss something? Why did they divorce and how does a cock get bigger?

I feel like I was in a drive by.

Completely lost with this one

Did that make sense to anyone else, because it sure as hell didn’t to me (must be getting old).

Sorry folks. This shoul be attached to the "A First Time Like No Other Sonya" series. I didn't set it up correctly. My bad. I'll see if the wonderful duo that run this site can fix my mistake.

As for a larger cock, wishful thinking? Pills actually worked? I dunno, still hoping.

Quite Nice.

Needs a little more back story and a sequel.

The premise is interesting.

3/5

I will score higher if completed. Hate half baked stuff

Really enjoyed the story. Hope the #1 means more are coming.

C'Mon the Daughter is a Witch . His online woman is a Witch you do not think maybe magic was used? You're thick

Quite jerkily written, hard to follow, and irritating to boot.

Scores 2/5

really confusing writing.

Was there a story here?

I'd guess that losing weight made his belly smaller, making his dick look bigger.

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I guess it's here because it was meant to be part of a series, but sounds more like Erotic Couplings.

WTF - I obviously missed something. Too damn confusing. Total fail.

Confusing as hell. Is there a story that precedes this one?

Mind reading witches??REALLY??

I read this for 20 seconds and stopped. So your story starts with the ex wife busting in on her ex husband who is about to cum in his bath water (Gross btw) and she says, as he is holding his cock, "have you lost weight?"

HaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHa!!!!!!!!

Very confusing

OK now that is just not fair! I can admit I screwed the pooch on where I posted this, not tying it into the series, and even rambling all over.

But to doubt that mind reading witches exist? Doesn't anyone watch the H and E channel? jeez

I thought he moved in because daughter was seriously ill. Is magic and mind reading an illness.

Two or three stories jumbled together. Pick a theme a stay focused. Mind reading and magic go in another category. Romantic erotic sex between two adults goes in another 2 categories. Incest theme well you get the point or maybe not. I guess in next chapter they re-marry then she has a lover and uses magic to make him want to be a cuck and her daughter dominates him fucks him in the ass goes inter-racial by dating a gay black man that fucks daddy drifts into lesbian as daughter has sex with another woman and her mom touching the incest category again the woman turns out to be an alien so we check the sci-fi box. Somewhere in this a plot is buried about personal growth forgiveness and world peace.

He is happy as long as his cock stays large and hard. Looking forward to next chapters. Maybe I should look in Humor category for next one.

Narrative was extremely confusing.

The most confusing story in a long time

Word salad from a writer with drain bamage!

Jibberish, no story just words. Very poor

JJ

I like fantasy and stuff but what is going on here champ

Confused

I couldn't keep straight who was saying what. Lost me.

What the hell did I just read?

When the cucks stories look better you know we had a major crash and burn, sorry but this was a bit of a mess.

And this little gem was really just bad " She walked up and started cooing and talking to the cat like it was a baby. It started purring. He started to get an erection again."

Well-played!!! Great allusion to 'Miranda'!!!

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Disregard the critics! They'd boo Neil Simon as surely as they'd boo Al Goldstein, and they think Jack Kerouac is Cracker Jack's city cousin!

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5/5!!!

Well I didn't finish this, too discombobulated, so I'm going to pretend I never saw it. Though I would like to know what a garden tub is and why you would have one in your house? Oh, and what's the H and E channel? What country is this in?

Nice story, definitely out of the usual. Looking forward to more - ignore the trolls.

So who fucked the cat.....him or her???

OK that one made me laugh.

Legio_Patria_Nostra doing his condescending thing again

????

What is going on here?

Not bad.

The stupid of this....whatever the fuck it was....made my head hurt.

Glad to know I'm not the only one wondering what the fuck is going on.