All Comments on 'Welcome to the Family Ch. 01'

Great start..ty

Love the idea and where this is going! Can’t wait to read more! Obviously there’s gonna be some fun dominance and real emotions, but absolutely loving the idea of him becoming something like a fits succubus’ thrall! Very reminiscent of New Girl, but hey, I love that too so no complaints here.

epic pls more

Great start, can’t wait to read more

This is a very good starter. Please write more

Please more I neeeddddd more

Please more

Futa stories dont usually do it for me (just cant see myself in the dom/aggressive role) but i'll admit the emotion in Victorias dream & the ambiguous ending has left me intirgued! Fortunately most of that happened after the other memorable moment: Vicoria turning up to school in a limbo! I know its a typo but honestly the image in my head! Had to stop reading for a while (& not for the usual reasons)

An interesting start. It’s in desperate need of a proofreading though.

Thank you for all the feedback. To those who liked the story. I'm happy you're enjoying it so far. And to those who notice the Grammer mistake, I apologize editing has never been my strong suit, but please don't be scared to point it out, It helps.

When is the next chapter I'm loving how this story has been laid out!?!?!?!

Give us more yes please we need to read the precious more we want MORE!!!!

Beautiful, I loved it! Nice work