All Comments on 'Welcome to Your Life'

by hypnosissir

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AlexiaAlexanderAlexiaAlexander21 days ago

You have to continue this please. Am so turned on right now.

AnonymousAnonymous20 days ago

Spectacularly hot. You must continue this story, Please. There is so much here that could be possible and by reading your other works, you are the author to make this into an even more incredible story.

AnonymousAnonymous20 days ago

Really lived this one, but the end has me annoyed. Could you please not do another evil hypnotist. Have the Master be James lost uncle there to help him and teach him to be a hypnotist. But Allison and Carla are already slaves so let's see where you take this one

mlrsdpicmmlrsdpicm20 days ago

Not a big fan of making a fool or cuckolding someone who did not deserve it. 1

AnonymousAnonymous17 days ago

I agree with bits of each of these previous comments, but mainly, please tell me there is a Part 2. I may not like it, but I'd really like to see where this goes. It would be nice, however, if at the end, James is taught what Allison needs to spice up their relationship and they live out a fulfilling love life with each other.

SchuifSchuif10 days ago

the twist at the end, love it. Like other I hope there well be sequels

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