by hypnosissir
Spectacularly hot. You must continue this story, Please. There is so much here that could be possible and by reading your other works, you are the author to make this into an even more incredible story.
Really lived this one, but the end has me annoyed. Could you please not do another evil hypnotist. Have the Master be James lost uncle there to help him and teach him to be a hypnotist. But Allison and Carla are already slaves so let's see where you take this one
I agree with bits of each of these previous comments, but mainly, please tell me there is a Part 2. I may not like it, but I'd really like to see where this goes. It would be nice, however, if at the end, James is taught what Allison needs to spice up their relationship and they live out a fulfilling love life with each other.