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Elaine_MatureElaine_Mature10 months agoAuthor

Mixed reception for this one. Probably the raw language of a rural Texan, no filter. Main character is a sweet lady, accepting as they come - she'll gladly fuck anybody, from anywhere, appreciate them as a person! But her casual colloquialisms can sound jarring. Sorry if that bothers some. But this character seemed more authentic this way.

LanceQuiverLanceQuiver10 months ago

Wow! I absolutely loved reading this! Hits the ground running and never lets up, as a great story should. Dynamic, percussive writing style reminiscent of the beat era entwines amazingly with the no holds barred heat and over the top, shameless sexuality. This is the kind of story I always hope to come across on this site, which despite its name offers few and far between that could really be called ‘literary’. I wish I had a 6-star rating to give! Anyway, thx for contributing this one, I’ll definitely check out your other stories!

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