All Comments on 'We're being Watched'

by ShriveledNox

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It was hot and they should do more of it

JoeehartleyJoeehartleyover 2 years ago

Thanks for the read

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So, you don't mind your wife showing up on the internet and humiliated? Aren't you the special kind of stupid?

BobbieSherBobbieSherover 2 years ago

A well written and enjoyable read. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Enjoyed the scenario and like your style.

Ignore the negative comments which are usually anonymous…the typical media cowards.

ShriveledNoxShriveledNoxover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you @Cleevedreams. Yeah I know, their opinions are still valid and I take any criticism and I don't let it affect me negatively. Really happy you liked my style, I'm in no sense a writer and English isn't my first language either so I'm happy by your comment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It was a great story. Would’ve been nice if it also had a part 2 to it. Their public fun escalating and the neighbor somehow being involved

sanchezshpsanchezshp16 days ago

Good story, imagine if there was a mirror and unknown to the husband she could also see the guy and that's what made her cum

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